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I hate Summer. I hate her crooked teeth.
I hate her 1960s haircut. I hate her knobby
knees. And I hate her cockroach-shaped splotch
on her neck. I hate the way she smacks her lips
before she talks. And I hate the way she sounds
when she laughs.


The trees used to just be green. Just green.
And now they have white flowers on them. The
sun used to hardly even be there; I never noticed
it. Now its rays blind me, but in the best way
possible.

My hand feels soft and perfect where it sits in
yours. When we sit at the movies, we laugh and
play with the pop corn.

Talk to me in the bathroom, tackle me in a bed,
rub my thighs at night, and stroke my hair when
I'm asleep. But never tell me you love me.

Drinking coffee with a newspaper, sitting on
the bed playing Superman, sex in the shower. It's
all so much fun.

Nothing has a deeper meaning unless you look hard
enough.
Technically this is fan-fiction for the movie (500) Days of Summer, but I never want to submit something into that category, sooo...

It also pertains to me, so technically, it doesn't really belong anywhere but here.
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FuzzyHoser Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I friggin' LOVE 500 Days of Summer!!

This is interesting though. Even without knowing the flow of the movie, this is awesome all by itself.
I really really like this!
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MissSarah15 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011
Ahh so do I!!! :dummy:
That movie is so wonderufl. ^^
Thank you. (:
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FuzzyHoser Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Mmhmm..
You're welcome, gal. (:
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mobpocket Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011
brief. constructive. criticism.

it's rays

should be

its rays
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MissSarah15 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011
:ashamed::shakefist:
*goes to fix it*
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nyogu Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
<333
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